I like all the characterization you were able to smack into this one. I am always curious how other people handle co-writes... how much atcual writing each author puts in, how much is just guidlines for using a certain character, and how much is just implcit trust ;) Being able to capture the personality of another author's character is something I personally respect, so Kudos to the group of you. I can't wait to see how this all devellops. I wanna know how the moon fits into the rest of the ongoing plot developments, such as they are.... :)

-Heather Hatch -- Well I lived with a child of snow when I was a soldier, and I fought every man for her until the nights grew colder.

She used to wear her hair like you except when she was sleeping, and then she'd weave it on a loom of smoke and gold and breathing.

-Leonard Cohen, "Winter Lady"