Very, very good Redmond. Your style is comic in nature. I like that, since you also have a knack for getting very detailed at exactly the right time to describe those comic scenes to the fullest, and then cease being quite so detailed so that the chapter doesn't get bogged down.

Further, the dialouge between the inkeeper and Lucius was great. The dialouge between the ship's captain and the cabin boy was good too, you make each person different in their speech and that helps alot in keeping the conversation straight, but the contest of words between the inkeeper and Lucius is definetly one of my favorite parts. Until the next time,

DarkSpiral